COM466 – University of Washington
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5 June 2009 • 4:45 pm
Filed under: Student Projects
Love it…there is some interesting characters in your video.
Much tighter, Ryan! Also, the closing quote brings, well, closure. :-) A short voiceover intro would give the story its missing opening.
It would help to boost your voiceover volume (especially the first one) to match the rest of the story. And the underexposed tap dancing has good sound but not-so-good visual – this could be cut for a compelling lede. :-)
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